The old page was good, but this one is better. It’s simpler, with really lovely lighting and perspective. Not to mention you want to turn to the next page. With the previous version I was a bit Meh on that point.
So, I’ve been working on Blood in The Water off and on for a few months. Unfortunately I don’t have a record of when I actually started it, the closest I have is November. Anyway, it started as a spin-off as the now discarded Keep What You Kill story, with a premise I enjoyed much more: [...] […]
The old page was good, but this one is better. It’s simpler, with really lovely lighting and perspective. Not to mention you want to turn to the next page. With the previous version I was a bit Meh on that point.
thank you! i’d like to think i’ve learnt a little about story telling in the three years since the first version of this page went up…
….*looks left. Looks right* Testing….?