gotta say, i was pretty happy with this page until that last panel. if our shadowy assailant was standing in front of his victim, he shouldn’t be coming at the hapless elf from that angle. blegh.
also, not sure if the flurry of small panels works or just comes off as messy.
So, I’ve been working on Blood in The Water off and on for a few months. Unfortunately I don’t have a record of when I actually started it, the closest I have is November. Anyway, it started as a spin-off as the now discarded Keep What You Kill story, with a premise I enjoyed much more: [...] […]
glow in the dark dentures? neat.
gotta say, i was pretty happy with this page until that last panel. if our shadowy assailant was standing in front of his victim, he shouldn’t be coming at the hapless elf from that angle. blegh.
also, not sure if the flurry of small panels works or just comes off as messy.